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      It's a Kite|追風箏的少女


      追風箏的少女

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        請根據以下三張連環圖畫的內容,以 "One summer afternoon, Grace was on her way home..." 開頭,寫一篇約 120 個單詞的文章,描述圖中主角所經歷的事件,并提供合理的解釋與結局。


      寫作小棧

      1. 看圖作文在于描述圖片的內容,也就是圖中人物(包括臉部表情、情緒、穿著、人物互動等)、時間、地點和事件等信息的細節串連起來描寫或敘述,一般會以下列兩種方式來呈現:

      *描述文(description)→根據提示或自己為圖中的主角命名,以第三人稱的觀點來描述或解讀圖片的內容。

      *敘述文(narration)→筆者本身融入圖中其中一個角色,用第一人稱的觀點來敘述故事情節。


      2. 不管采取描述文或敘述文,都記得運用想象力和邏輯思考先構思出一個合理的劇情,亦即重點分明,有開頭、發展、結尾,以求故事情節前后連貫。


      3. 善用轉折語來串連每張圖之間的關系或發展,方能寫出流暢的看圖說故事,而非天馬行空的跳躍式描述或敘述。再者,隨著故事發展,可適度加入圖中人物的情緒變化,讓文章內容更豐富、更具可看性。


      構思方向

      檢視圖片后,以描述文來解讀圖片內容,構思出以下劇情:

      Grace身穿洋裝、頭戴帽子,手拿洋傘走在路上→一陣風把她的帽子吹走了,她拔腿狂追→她在公園看到她的帽子飄在空中。

      故事結尾則是 Grace 發現那不是她的帽子,那個東西只是長得很像帽子的風箏罷了。


      動動腦(Brainstorming

      故事設定主 題  a kite

      時 地  one summer afternoon, in the park

      人 物  Grace, a boy who was flying a kite


      寫作大綱引導句  One summer afternoon, Grace was on her way home from having

      tea with her friends.


      發展句圖一    Grace was walking down the street happily.

      圖二    She ran after her hat until she lost sight of it.

      圖三    She saw a kite which was similar to her hat.


      結論  Grace realized that it was not her hat, but a kite in the shape of one.


      范文

      One summer afternoon, Grace was on her way home from having tea with her friends. While walking on the sidewalk, she flashed her radiant smile because she was still basking in her friends' compliments. They said she looked elegant in her outfit, which included a matching dress, hat, and parasol. Suddenly, a gust of wind blew her hat away. Grace chased after it, but it rose higher and higher. She kept running until she lost sight of it.


      Exhausted and disappointed, Grace gave up and walked away in low spirits. When she was passing by a park near her home, she saw several kites flying high in the sky. One of them looked familiar, and Grace mistook it for her hat, so she approached the boy who was flying the kite and asked him to give it back. Snot was running down his face as he looked at her strangely. It turned out that it was not her hat. Instead, it was just a kite in the shape of a hat that was similar to the one she lost.



      某個夏季的午后,葛莉絲和朋友茶敘后走在回家的路上。她走在人行道上,臉上洋溢著微笑,因為她仍沉浸在朋友們的贊美中,她們說她的洋裝、帽子和洋傘等跟她很相配,整套衣服穿在她身上讓她看起來很高雅。忽然,一陣風把她的帽子吹走了。葛莉絲追著帽子跑,但它愈飄愈高。她一直追到帽子飛離視線為止。


      葛莉絲又累又沮喪,她放棄追帽子,心情低落地走開。她經過住家旁邊的公園時,看見幾個風箏在高空中遨翔。其中一個很眼熟,而葛莉絲把它誤認是她的帽子,所以葛莉絲走近那個放風箏的男孩,要求他歸還帽子。那個男孩奇怪地看著她,臉上還流著鼻涕。結果那根本不是她的帽子。那只是個帽子造型的風箏,跟她搞丟的帽子長得很像罷了。






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      It's a Kite|追風箏的少女

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